3rd Quarter Submission Feedback

Just like last quarter, we went over everyone's magazine or film and talked about what we liked and the critiques.  My group and I changed a variety of things from the last quarter submission.  We changed the start of the film along with cutting out many scenes.  The feedback that we received was mostly positive but we need to add some of the scenes we cut back into the film.  We needs to also cut some of the beginning scene where the drome is flying through the neighborhood.  That scene was too long and takes up most of the film.  ON the positive note, many people thought our film was funny especially when Donte (the dad) and Hannah (the mom) are in the car talking and there is an awkward pause before exiting the car.  Our film is close to being done but there still is many things that we can improve before the final submission.