Revision- Final Scene

After viewing our video many times and trying to make it the best it can be, my group and I decided that our final revision would be the final scene.  We previously had Dante (the dad), looking out the window and saying "those hooligans" meaning that the crazy adults next door were having a party.  It was obvious after the watching the video many times that the view can tell it was not night time and that we should have a better last impression.  With many ideas and thoughts thrown out on the table, we decided to throw a little cliff hanger with Morgan's grandparents in the store holding up beer about to party right after Hannah and Dante were just talking about how they are glad their new neighbors do not party because of their kids.  Will this new revision, we hope that it will grab the viewers' attention more and make them want to watch the rest of it.

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